(+2 plus an extra one for your debut. I took it upon myself to format it the way I tried to tell you earlier. Make it more like this but also be sure to add in some description as well. Where is Gabriel when he is telling us this story? What is he wearing? Is he mad? Is he happy? Whats going on? Also, you should really run this through a word document and do a simple spell check on it, not a big deal but it will help you in the long term. I can tell you really tried hard to do this so I will be giving you more points than I have in the past to others. Don't let this bother you, just try to take my advice and grow. I look forward to seeing everything you can do here in OCW.)
TOTAL = Justin Gabriel - 3p