(+2 for a short and simple promo. I suggest you get rid of the spaces after every sentence in your promos, it doesn't help at all. You do a pretty good job of getting it across that you are Big Show and I can really see you moving up in OCW with your skills online. Keep up the good work and just keep working on the stuff I discussed with you. Your debut promo was really good, and this was as well. I look forward to seeing what you can get out there during this week.)
TOTAL = Big Show - 2p